Review On our News Film

Because we have made changes for our film, we wanted some comments from our class mates to comment on our film and if you listen the comment's are mainly positive. Which puts a smile on our faces.

Final Film

With our film we made a few changes because some of the sounds was not right. so now this is our final film.

New Evaluation

The Evaluation 

We had to update the evaluation because we had made some changes to our film.



This a new and improved evolution that me and Oumie worked on together.

New Improved Film

we had to Make a change in our film because there was a scene which wasn't focused and if didn't change it will cost us a lot of marks. The fact that we had to redo the scene it meant that we had to change the character because she wasn't not available so we needed to get a new actress which we found. Also we couldn't do it at the same location so we found somewhere else but as you could see even though the location was different we had tried to make it sink in and look like it was meant to be there. Which I think we have done it successfully.

New film

We have decided to change the whole of our film, such as the clothing's the characters wear however we thought we had done a good job with the shots but two of the scene where out of focus which means we may have to do them again. We are happy with the feedback because it means we are learning and every time we improve it, it gets better. however we feel that the acting is much better and realistic.

Old Evaluation's

This is our evaluation, in this slide show it talks about our work and effort we have put in our film. it talks about mise-en-scene, editing, sound, and cine, and the characters role in the film; how their behaviour is like and what class they are from.


 

 This is the finale evolution^. We were told to make it more lively.  

Our film

We have now finished editing our film; now on YouTube for other people to see and comment on.
We have made a lot of changes on our film because we were not happy with some parts also the acting but now we are very happy with the changes we have made and we are proud of our film and personally I wouldn't do anything different.
 Hope you guys enjoy part two of our film and comment on YouTube when finished.

Personal I would change the main character because we wanted it to be more dramatic and the my acting isn't persuasive to grab the characters attention.

If you watch 2:30 of the film you could see some mistakes such as you could see the camera women in the reflection

Also as you could see in this shot it's not good at all because it only has half of the characters faces in the scene.

We have changed the name, so we can see the full text.

We saw that one of the actress wasn't good enough so we took her out of her film, because she was smiling even doe it was mean to be a sad moment. We made small changes makes a difference to our work and now we are proud to watch it.

 We have made the changes and uploaded it on YouTube. ^

After watching our film on YouTube we feel that there needs to be an improvement to make it more dramatic. so we suggested on using one of our friends gran to be the mother in our film , because she is older and it will look more believable which will make our film more dramatic.